Blackjack777 wrote:ouch not really ... what can i change to make it not a joke.... all i want is a sword that powers itself off the soul is steals, and has the illusion of souls swarming around them. i thought using the souls would be possible because of his phasing ability which he could (manipulate the molecules around him to) form the spirits of the dead ninja he killed.
Souls do not have molecules... they are souls.... As in... not of this world, not physical things. Agreed which is why it says he manipulates the molecules around the soul allowing them to cast ninjutsu
in naruto itachi has a blade the seals the souls of those it touches.
Cool, itachi also had the sharingan, you want that too? Nope just to seal souls in the sword.
The demon brothers who had the nine tails chakra in them, also had weapons that could seal people.
Cool, they also had the ninetails chakra, you want that too? Nope just to seal souls in the sword.
impure resurrection brought back the body and soul of a ninja and controlled them
Orochimaru brought back the hokages of old as well.
cool, he also had op resurrections and won't die ever, you want that too? Nope just to seal souls in the sword.
Naruto had the chakra's of his mother and his father in him to help when the Nine tail was breaking the seal, they also came back from the dead for a moment.
[badword] wrong. their chakra was in the seal that THEY made. They didn't come back from the dead, they simply left a message for him. Which is true but she also cast a jutsu to bind the ninetails as well as it was more of a conversation than just a message.
So how can i change this to make it not a joke?
Its simply a sword with a seal on it that uses chakra to steal/activate souls that can attack.
Does he really have to go in to why this is denied?
All i did by listing those things was to show that it is not far from the naruto universe. But im assuming u missed that, if i wanted all that other stuff would i not have put it in to the capabilities of the sword?
But regardless of me being sarcastic. I simply wanted it for looks and appearance. The abilities of the sword, so far as attacks and defense were more of a perk.
All i want the sword to do is seal away souls, but i have changed it it no longer steals the souls (of people who were dead anyway) it now creates a portal on the battle field.