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defune

PostPosted by shuu » Mon Sep 03, 2012 8:39 pm

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      history
    it is unknown where the defune arose. it is said that they have always existed; at least since the dawn of ninja, that is. since the advent of recorded history however, their history is more clear. living scattered around the islands of mizu no kuni. of the course of the clan wars, they were nearly eliminated until the recontrolling of kirigakure by Momochi Zabuza. This was an incredibly ironic happening, because the leader of the slan. Defune Jiyuu, was in actuality the the Shodai Mizukage. Affectionately called simply "Shodai" by his people, his reluctance to use his kekke genkai led many to disregard or forget the fact that he belonged to the Defune clan. He died in self sacrifice in a legendary battle ages ago, and with no true successor to the throne, the country was launched into a civil war for a decade before a true Mizukage was chosen as his successor. He is buried in a shrine located in part of the country no longer inhabited. Strangely, the tiny island it was on was totally protected by the Funbo Enkon and Rokubi attacks. However, when Momochi Zabuza took control, this piece of history was forgotten and the Defune were hunted almost in spite of this. Since then and the 3 subsequent Mizukage's followed by Kirigakure's destruction, the clan was resurfaced. A splinter faction went into hiding during the clan wars and thrived, only recently re-emerging into the world.

    Perhaps paranoid, they were worried and did not feel safe without the protection of a village. The power of their kekke genkai in ages past attracted all manner of attention, and so they sought a village to protect them. Choosing Kasai, they in exchange for housing and protection, have promised their services to the Kage no matter what they be. A splinter section of the clan is highly angry with this unconditional servitude and plans to defect. Unknown at large, it is likely they will do so peacefully.
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      kekke genkai
    the Defune's kekkei genkai is present in two forms; an innate portion [dojutsu] and a trained portion [a fighting style] based upon what element they are given at birth.


      Kasho - Perfect Realm
    Kasho is name of the 'perfect realm'. It is another plane of existence "layered" either directly above or directly below this one, one cannot be sure. It is nearly identical to this world except it exists as it would if man never came to be. The Meikyougan and successive abilities access this realm.

      Meikyougan - Mirror Eye
      Image
    The Meikyougan is a doujutsu that all Defune clan members have active from the first time they see themselves in a mirror. With focus, the Defune clan member can temporarily go blind. In doing so, their spirits will inhabit Kasho, from where they will be able to, dissassociated from their body, observe the nearby area (double vision; of both this world and Kasho) for a period up to five minutes in an immedaite range depending upon their rank. Each use of this ability "cracks" the Meikyougan, until an undetermined (but finite) number of cracks has been acheived; a partially cracked Meikyougan is illustrated here. Whether using it's ability of truesight or not, the Meikyougan can see chakra. An description of how it sees chakra would be to describe it as translucent blobs of colored gas. This ability must be "activated" by the user and is not passive. Those proficient with chakra control however are capable of having it "activated" indefinently to the point of the chakra sight being a passive ability more or less. It is said that a fully cracked Meikyougan will not only cause the user to become blind, but will also transform them into a demon that will stop at nothing but the blood of their kin. The later is likely a simple rumor to tell kids so they do not use the ability. That being said, there is an immense fear and respect for the ability within the clan.

    The Meikyougan can be upgraded further through unknown means.
      Kanryou Meikyougan - Perfect Mirror Eye
      Image
    The Kanryou Meikyougan allows for a much higher leveled control and manipulation of the chakra realm. Specifics are unknown but to be developed in the jutsu section. No known member of the Defune has ever unlocked this advanced state, but it is said to exist and pictures (drawn) of it do exist within the clan.

    Activating any chakra element past a single element cannot be done without this level of dojutsu; and because of that, it is the general opinion that Defune clan members cannot do so as this perfect form of the dojutsu is considered a myth.
    --
    The Defune also possess a series of trained (read: not inherited) series of fighting styles, each one developed and suited towards a specific element, Oni : Earth, Kappa : Water, Tengu : Wind, Kitsune : Fire, and Dragon : Lightning.

      information
      Clan Training
    All Defune are trained in at least one aspect of their elemental fightning style should they possess an element. In addition, they are taught a series of proverbs and myths regarding both their kekke genkai, and a general instilled hatred for both war, violence, and the intolerance that spawned the Clan Wars of Kirigakure no sato that decimated both their culture and population. With the advent of recent years however, they have tried to teach this with a way of avoiding dogma however displaying all the facts.

      Population
    Nearly all Defune possess a light colored hair; be it red or various shades of blonde that range from almost natural platnium to a bright yellow. Known as detectives within Kasai, they typically tend to hate villainy in all of its forms, and are naturally inquisitive and bright when it comes to their demeanor. Great researchers, they claim to be some of the first "chakra theorists", although their understanding of their kekkei genkai and most of the knowledge they acheived through this has been lost.

      Nature/Values
    The Defune of old were a pacifist, peace loving clan that sought to only investigate and research their environment. Over time this led to them being weary and almost paranoid, especially after their status as an entire clan of missing nin in hiding from Kirigakure. However, with the advent of their new ascent to Kasaigakure, they have attempted to leave behind their paranoia and open up to the world, re-awakening their creative vigor and to investigate the world anew, restoring their encyclopedias of old that have been destroyed by Kirigakure.
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Re: defune

PostPosted by carcinoGeneticist » Tue Sep 04, 2012 2:28 pm

Mkay, pretty good.
Two things.
One, I really really hate dojutsu that can "see chakra", especially as a passive. I'd suggest either making it an active ability, requiring chakra control for passive use, and some range limitations, preferably less than line of sight.
Two, I need info on the Kanryou Meikyougan. The use may be jutsu section, but if it's in the clan profile, I need to know what it does before I can approve it to be passed along to them. [This is a little redundant since I'm also a jutsu mod, but eh. Just covering my bases here.]
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Re: defune

PostPosted by shuu » Tue Sep 04, 2012 2:41 pm

Chakra Sight is modified.

The Kanryou Meikyougan allows for a much higher leveled control and manipulation of the chakra realm is the first line that describes it, and is essentially it. What the individual user does with this manipulation is up to them, or atleast it is supposed to be.
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Re: defune

PostPosted by carcinoGeneticist » Tue Sep 04, 2012 2:57 pm

shuu wrote:

. D . E . F . U . N . E .



--
      history
    it is unknown where the defune arose. it is said that they have always existed; at least since the dawn of ninja, that is. since the advent of recorded history however, their history is more clear. living scattered around the islands of mizu no kuni. of the course of the clan wars, they were nearly eliminated until the recontrolling of kirigakure by Momochi Zabuza. Since then and the 3 subsequent Mizukage's followed by Kirigakure's destruction, the clan was resurfaced. A splinter faction went into hiding during the clan wars and thrived, only recently re-emerging into the world.

    Perhaps paranoid, they were worried and did not feel safe without the protection of a village. The power of their kekke genkai in ages past attracted all manner of attention, and so they sought a village to protect them. Choosing Kasai, they in exchange for housing and protection, have promised their services to the Kage no matter what they be. A splinter section of the clan is highly angry with this unconditional servitude and plans to defect. Unknown at large, it is likely they will do so peacefully.
--
      kekke genkai
    the Defune's kekkei genkai is present in two forms; an innate portion [dojutsu] and a trained portion [a fighting style] based upon what element they are given at birth.


      Kasho - Perfect Realm
    Kasho is name of the 'perfect realm'. It is another plane of existence "layered" either directly above or directly below this one, one cannot be sure. It is nearly identical to this world except it exists as it would if man never came to be. The Meikyougan and successive abilities access this realm.

      Meikyougan - Mirror Eye
      Image
    The Meikyougan is a doujutsu that all Defune clan members have active from the first time they see themselves in a mirror. With focus, the Defune clan member can temporarily go blind. In doing so, their spirits will inhabit Kasho, from where they will be able to, dissassociated from their body, observe the nearby area (double vision; of both this world and Kasho) for a period up to five minutes in an immedaite range depending upon their rank. Each use of this ability "cracks" the Meikyougan, until an undetermined (but finite) number of cracks has been acheived; a partially cracked Meikyougan is illustrated here. Whether using it's ability of truesight or not, the Meikyougan can see chakra. An description of how it sees chakra would be to describe it as translucent blobs of colored gas. This ability must be "activated" by the user and is not passive. Those proficient with chakra control however are capable of having it "activated" indefinently to the point of the chakra sight being a passive ability more or less. It is said that a fully cracked Meikyougan will not only cause the user to become blind, but will also transform them into a demon that will stop at nothing but the blood of their kin. The later is likely a simple rumor to tell kids so they do not use the ability. That being said, there is an immense fear and respect for the ability within the clan.

    The Meikyougan can be upgraded further through unknown means.
      Kanryou Meikyougan - Perfect Mirror Eye
      Image
    The Kanryou Meikyougan allows for a much higher leveled control and manipulation of the chakra realm. Specifics are unknown but to be developed in the jutsu section. No known member of the Defune has ever unlocked this advanced state, but it is said to exist and pictures (drawn) of it do exist within the clan.
    --
    The Defune also possess a series of trained (read: not inherited) series of fighting styles, each one developed and suited towards a specific element, Oni : Earth, Kappa : Water, Tengu : Wind, Kitsune : Fire, and Dragon : Lightning.

      information
      Clan Training
    All Defune are trained in at least one aspect of their elemental fightning style should they possess an element. In addition, they are taught a series of proverbs and myths regarding both their kekke genkai, and a general instilled hatred for both war, violence, and the intolerance that spawned the Clan Wars of Kirigakure no sato that decimated both their culture and population. With the advent of recent years however, they have tried to teach this with a way of avoiding dogma however displaying all the facts.

      Population
    Nearly all Defune possess a light colored hair; be it red or various shades of blonde that range from almost natural platnium to a bright yellow. Known as detectives within Kasai, they typically tend to hate villainy in all of its forms, and are naturally inquisitive and bright when it comes to their demeanor. Great researchers, they claim to be some of the first "chakra theorists", although their understanding of their kekkei genkai and most of the knowledge they acheived through this has been lost.

      Nature/Values
    The Defune of old were a pacifist, peace loving clan that sought to only investigate and research their environment. Over time this led to them being weary and almost paranoid, especially after their status as an entire clan of missing nin in hiding from Kirigakure. However, with the advent of their new ascent to Kasaigakure, they have attempted to leave behind their paranoia and open up to the world, re-awakening their creative vigor and to investigate the world anew, restoring their encyclopedias of old that have been destroyed by Kirigakure.

Approved. Dibs on continuing this in the jutsu section.
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Re: defune

PostPosted by shuu » Wed Sep 05, 2012 4:01 pm

Updated the history and limited their ability to gain elements.
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Re: defune

PostPosted by carcinoGeneticist » Wed Sep 05, 2012 4:23 pm

shuu wrote:

. D . E . F . U . N . E .



--
      history
    it is unknown where the defune arose. it is said that they have always existed; at least since the dawn of ninja, that is. since the advent of recorded history however, their history is more clear. living scattered around the islands of mizu no kuni. of the course of the clan wars, they were nearly eliminated until the recontrolling of kirigakure by Momochi Zabuza. This was an incredibly ironic happening, because the leader of the slan. Defune Jiyuu, was in actuality the the Shodai Mizukage. Affectionately called simply "Shodai" by his people, his reluctance to use his kekke genkai led many to disregard or forget the fact that he belonged to the Defune clan. He died in self sacrifice in a legendary battle ages ago, and with no true successor to the throne, the country was launched into a civil war for a decade before a true Mizukage was chosen as his successor. He is buried in a shrine located in part of the country no longer inhabited. Strangely, the tiny island it was on was totally protected by the Funbo Enkon and Rokubi attacks. However, when Momochi Zabuza took control, this piece of history was forgotten and the Defune were hunted almost in spite of this. Since then and the 3 subsequent Mizukage's followed by Kirigakure's destruction, the clan was resurfaced. A splinter faction went into hiding during the clan wars and thrived, only recently re-emerging into the world.

    Perhaps paranoid, they were worried and did not feel safe without the protection of a village. The power of their kekke genkai in ages past attracted all manner of attention, and so they sought a village to protect them. Choosing Kasai, they in exchange for housing and protection, have promised their services to the Kage no matter what they be. A splinter section of the clan is highly angry with this unconditional servitude and plans to defect. Unknown at large, it is likely they will do so peacefully.
--
      kekke genkai
    the Defune's kekkei genkai is present in two forms; an innate portion [dojutsu] and a trained portion [a fighting style] based upon what element they are given at birth.


      Kasho - Perfect Realm
    Kasho is name of the 'perfect realm'. It is another plane of existence "layered" either directly above or directly below this one, one cannot be sure. It is nearly identical to this world except it exists as it would if man never came to be. The Meikyougan and successive abilities access this realm.

      Meikyougan - Mirror Eye
      Image
    The Meikyougan is a doujutsu that all Defune clan members have active from the first time they see themselves in a mirror. With focus, the Defune clan member can temporarily go blind. In doing so, their spirits will inhabit Kasho, from where they will be able to, dissassociated from their body, observe the nearby area (double vision; of both this world and Kasho) for a period up to five minutes in an immedaite range depending upon their rank. Each use of this ability "cracks" the Meikyougan, until an undetermined (but finite) number of cracks has been acheived; a partially cracked Meikyougan is illustrated here. Whether using it's ability of truesight or not, the Meikyougan can see chakra. An description of how it sees chakra would be to describe it as translucent blobs of colored gas. This ability must be "activated" by the user and is not passive. Those proficient with chakra control however are capable of having it "activated" indefinently to the point of the chakra sight being a passive ability more or less. It is said that a fully cracked Meikyougan will not only cause the user to become blind, but will also transform them into a demon that will stop at nothing but the blood of their kin. The later is likely a simple rumor to tell kids so they do not use the ability. That being said, there is an immense fear and respect for the ability within the clan.

    The Meikyougan can be upgraded further through unknown means.
      Kanryou Meikyougan - Perfect Mirror Eye
      Image
    The Kanryou Meikyougan allows for a much higher leveled control and manipulation of the chakra realm. Specifics are unknown but to be developed in the jutsu section. No known member of the Defune has ever unlocked this advanced state, but it is said to exist and pictures (drawn) of it do exist within the clan.

    Activating any chakra element past a single element cannot be done without this level of dojutsu; and because of that, it is the general opinion that Defune clan members cannot do so as this perfect form of the dojutsu is considered a myth.
    --
    The Defune also possess a series of trained (read: not inherited) series of fighting styles, each one developed and suited towards a specific element, Oni : Earth, Kappa : Water, Tengu : Wind, Kitsune : Fire, and Dragon : Lightning.

      information
      Clan Training
    All Defune are trained in at least one aspect of their elemental fightning style should they possess an element. In addition, they are taught a series of proverbs and myths regarding both their kekke genkai, and a general instilled hatred for both war, violence, and the intolerance that spawned the Clan Wars of Kirigakure no sato that decimated both their culture and population. With the advent of recent years however, they have tried to teach this with a way of avoiding dogma however displaying all the facts.

      Population
    Nearly all Defune possess a light colored hair; be it red or various shades of blonde that range from almost natural platnium to a bright yellow. Known as detectives within Kasai, they typically tend to hate villainy in all of its forms, and are naturally inquisitive and bright when it comes to their demeanor. Great researchers, they claim to be some of the first "chakra theorists", although their understanding of their kekkei genkai and most of the knowledge they acheived through this has been lost.

      Nature/Values
    The Defune of old were a pacifist, peace loving clan that sought to only investigate and research their environment. Over time this led to them being weary and almost paranoid, especially after their status as an entire clan of missing nin in hiding from Kirigakure. However, with the advent of their new ascent to Kasaigakure, they have attempted to leave behind their paranoia and open up to the world, re-awakening their creative vigor and to investigate the world anew, restoring their encyclopedias of old that have been destroyed by Kirigakure.

Re-approved.
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