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Fighters Dream Sealing Method/Fighting Seal

PostPosted by kirerellim » Mon Dec 07, 2009 2:43 am

Just curious if this makes any sense. Anyone can use it if it does get approved of course.

REQUIREMENTS TO LEARN:
-Jounin+ from that has access to Hokage sealing scrolls. Weather a privilege granted by the Hokage or stolen is up to you.


Character Name: None
Name of Sealing Method: Fighters Dream
Rank: A
Preparations: A large scale version of the seal is drawn on the floor(ink will work, but blood has a better success rating) and the sealer makes forty handseals in succession, while standing next to the target who is in the center of the seal. When the handseals are completed, the user touches the palm to the heart of the target. The seal draws in, forming in miniature where the palm hit. It will be unknown if it is a success until first time of activation.
Positive Effects on Target: Will naturally have slightly better chakra control then peers.
Negative Effects on User: They will die on first use if not positioned exactly above the heart (Chance depends upon skill of sealer). The total chakra of the user is reduced because it is used to 'maintain' the seal, weather or not in use (about 5%). First time use will be painful, but bearable. After that the seal causes no pain until after it deactivates.
Seal Info: This seal controls and directs the flow of about 35% the users chakra to the muscles of the body. This causes their speed and power to be increased by quite a bit even if they are not particularly talented at his skill. However, this was designed to work from directly above the heart so if it is not placed perfectly, chakra will be lanced through the user, killing him in moments. This chakra flow blocks the brain from noticing the fatigue of the body so that it slowly builds up. When the seal ends, the fatigue rebounds and hits the brain all at once, overwhelming it. This will cause the user to be immobile until the brain has recovered from shock. Even after shock wears off, the fatigue remains, so the ninja in question is still weak though he or she will be able to move probably.

Character Name: None
Name of Seal: Fighting Seal
Rank: A
Location of the Seal: Over the heart.
Preparations: To activate, the user directs about 35% of his total chakra into the seal. After that it takes over.
Transformation Process:
-Stage One [Genin]: The user will get slightly bigger muscles. Enough that someone looking at them when it happens will be able to tell the difference. The speed and power increases by half of the users original speed and power. (1 1/2 original power/speed total)
-Stage Two [Chuunin]: The users muscle mass will increase again, this time very noticeable. Even someone who only had seen them glancingly before and after would see a difference. The kanji in the seal begin to duplicate themselves over the users body, though they don't spread past the chest. The speed and power increases by the users original speed and power. (Double original power/speed total)
-Stage Three [Jounin]: The users muscle mass returns to usual. Instead, the user seems to shimmer, as the chakra supplementing the muscles in the body begins to shine through the skin. At this point, the kanji is written all over them to their first joints (knees and elbows). At this stage, The speed and power increases by double the users original speed and power. (Triple original power/speed total)
Positive Effects on Target: Increased strength, speed, and mobility
Negative Effects on User: Physical Body Strain: Each stage fatigues the body more and more, though the body will not accept this until after the transformation ends. At this point, the built up fatigue hits the user all at once. While typically the worst that will happen is that he or she will go comatose for some amount of time(based on fatigue amount), it is possible to die from overuse, if the body is unable to handle the strain that you put on it. In that case, when the seal ends, your heart stops. Period. The minimum drain however is that the user can't move for [2] posts after first level use, [4]after second, and [6] after third. This cuts in half at Jounin level.
If the seal isn't directly over the heart, you die.
It consumes 35% of your chakra.
Seal Info: This seal controls and directs the flow of about 35% the users chakra to the muscles of the body. This causes their speed and power to be increased by quite a bit even if they are not particularly talented at his skill. However, this was designed to work from directly above the heart so if it is not placed perfectly, chakra will be lanced through the user, killing him in moments. This chakra flow blocks the brain from noticing the fatigue of the body so that it slowly builds up. When the seal ends, the fatigue rebounds and hits the brain all at once, overwhelming it. This will cause the user to be immobile until the brain has recovered from shock. Even after shock wears off, the fatigue remains, so the ninja in question is still weak though he or she will be able to move probably.

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Re: Fighters Dream Sealing Method/Fighting Seal

PostPosted by Love » Tue Dec 08, 2009 10:39 pm

What you are trying to do is not impossible, and you're effects section and everything is in order. You did a good job with coming up with downsides, and overall everything looks fine.

My only concern is who is this for?
With not having filled out either of the character name section. As an A-ranked seal only a Jounin level seals user could learn the sealing method, and only someone that has learned it can apply it to others.

So, could you come up with a set of criteria for who you would let learn this seal. At the very least you need to mention somewhere that only a Jounin could learn it, as it seems like you are just creating a seal type, rather then a seal for a character of yours, which is normally what is done in this section.
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Re: Fighters Dream Sealing Method/Fighting Seal

PostPosted by kirerellim » Wed Dec 09, 2009 12:10 am

I figure that there are scrolls everywhere in the ninja world that are full of different recorded techniques. Could this not be one of them? I also thought that yes, when I make a character he or she will probably eventually learn this seal to enhance their abilities, but I don't want to start with the seal, nor do I think it should be limited to a clan or family.
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Re: Fighters Dream Sealing Method/Fighting Seal

PostPosted by Love » Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:44 pm

My question wasn't really an IC thing of where you get the knowledge from.

You just need an OOC list of requirements to meet in order to learn it. Like I said, being an A-ranked seal, one of those requirements is that only a Jounin level Fuuinjutsu user could learn the sealing method. Put this, and anything else that you require, into the first post and you'll be all set.
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Re: Fighters Dream Sealing Method/Fighting Seal

PostPosted by kirerellim » Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:13 pm

Ah, sorry, misunderstood. Is this ok?
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Re: Fighters Dream Sealing Method/Fighting Seal

PostPosted by Tomoushii » Fri Dec 11, 2009 7:15 pm

this reeks of the gates...

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Re: Fighters Dream Sealing Method/Fighting Seal

PostPosted by kirerellim » Fri Dec 11, 2009 7:28 pm

The gates were the inspiration for the seal, but gates are much more god like. I feel this is still within limits of non-god modding though. And this has negative effects that the gates do not have. Does it being Gates like make it banned?
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Re: Fighters Dream Sealing Method/Fighting Seal

PostPosted by Tomoushii » Sat Dec 12, 2009 10:15 am

kirerellim wrote:Just curious if this makes any sense. Anyone can use it if it does get approved of course.

REQUIREMENTS TO LEARN:
-Jounin+ from that has access to Hokage sealing scrolls. Weather a privilege granted by the Hokage or stolen is up to you.


Character Name: None
Name of Sealing Method: Fighters Dream
Rank: A
Preparations: A large scale version of the seal is drawn on the floor(ink will work, but blood has a better success rating) and the sealer makes forty handseals in succession, while standing next to the target who is in the center of the seal. When the handseals are completed, the user touches the palm to the heart of the target. The seal draws in, forming in miniature where the palm hit. It will be unknown if it is a success until first time of activation.
Positive Effects on Target: Will naturally have slightly better chakra control then peers.
Negative Effects on User: They will die on first use if not positioned exactly above the heart (Chance depends upon skill of sealer). The total chakra of the user is reduced because it is used to 'maintain' the seal, weather or not in use (about 5%). First time use will be painful, but bearable. After that the seal causes no pain until after it deactivates.
Seal Info: This seal controls and directs the flow of about 35% the users chakra to the muscles of the body. This causes their speed and power to be increased by quite a bit even if they are not particularly talented at his skill. However, this was designed to work from directly above the heart so if it is not placed perfectly, chakra will be lanced through the user, killing him in moments. This chakra flow blocks the brain from noticing the fatigue of the body so that it slowly builds up. When the seal ends, the fatigue rebounds and hits the brain all at once, overwhelming it. This will cause the user to be immobile until the brain has recovered from shock. Even after shock wears off, the fatigue remains, so the ninja in question is still weak though he or she will be able to move probably.

Character Name: None
Name of Seal: Fighting Seal
Rank: A
Location of the Seal: Over the heart.
Preparations: To activate, the user directs about 35% of his total chakra into the seal. After that it takes over.
Transformation Process:
-Stage One [Genin]: The user will get slightly bigger muscles. Enough that someone looking at them when it happens will be able to tell the difference. The speed and power increases by half of the users original speed and power. (1 1/2 original power/speed total)
-Stage Two [Chuunin]: The users muscle mass will increase again, this time very noticeable. Even someone who only had seen them glancingly before and after would see a difference. The kanji in the seal begin to duplicate themselves over the users body, though they don't spread past the chest. The speed and power increases by the users original speed and power. (Double original power/speed total)
-Stage Three [Jounin]: The users muscle mass returns to usual. Instead, the user seems to shimmer, as the chakra supplementing the muscles in the body begins to shine through the skin. At this point, the kanji is written all over them to their first joints (knees and elbows). At this stage, The speed and power increases by double the users original speed and power. (Triple original power/speed total)
Positive Effects on Target: Increased strength, speed, and mobility
Negative Effects on User: Physical Body Strain: Each stage fatigues the body more and more, though the body will not accept this until after the transformation ends. At this point, the built up fatigue hits the user all at once. While typically the worst that will happen is that he or she will go comatose for some amount of time(based on fatigue amount), it is possible to die from overuse, if the body is unable to handle the strain that you put on it. In that case, when the seal ends, your heart stops. Period. The minimum drain however is that the user can't move for [2] posts after first level use, [4]after second, and [6] after third. This cuts in half at Jounin level.
If the seal isn't directly over the heart, you die.
It consumes 35% of your chakra.
Seal Info: This seal controls and directs the flow of about 35% the users chakra to the muscles of the body. This causes their speed and power to be increased by quite a bit even if they are not particularly talented at his skill. However, this was designed to work from directly above the heart so if it is not placed perfectly, chakra will be lanced through the user, killing him in moments. This chakra flow blocks the brain from noticing the fatigue of the body so that it slowly builds up. When the seal ends, the fatigue rebounds and hits the brain all at once, overwhelming it. This will cause the user to be immobile until the brain has recovered from shock. Even after shock wears off, the fatigue remains, so the ninja in question is still weak though he or she will be able to move probably.

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nope i just wanted to make certain you understood how important the downsides are... you've convinced me...
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